Monday, June 27, 2011

my first attempt at writing a song?

i stand here in the flames of the past
that burn with a white intensity
haunting me with the bad
sorrowing me with the good
making me fall to my knees with the memories of you
the black smoke is arising i am chastising in the smoke and flames
its uprising is comprimising my rationality with its brutality
with its vehement lacrimation total annihilation of my morality
is evident but all i can think of is you

Chorus 1
the black smoke is arising i am chastising in the smoke and flames
its uprising is comprimising my rationality with its brutality

walking down this path ive been here before
why am i going back to the ship that has sailed
somethings possessing me to go find her
bring her back to shore
with all my might i cant resist, why am i not strong enough
what is so strong bout this ship that draws me in
im falling from sanity, just to much of a pull
its calling me, its beconing, i can hear her over the sound of the
waves
as i drop in the sand i see i am a fool
it seems im not worthy of this ship, not worthy to marvel in its glow

Chorus 2
the black smoke is arising i am chastising in the smoke and flames
its uprising is comprimising my rationality with its brutality
im falling from sanity, Falling from grace
the flames are melting the waves

i stand here in the flames of the past
that burn with a white intensity
haunting me with the bad
sorrowing me with the good
making me fall to my knees with the memories of you
the black smoke is arising i am chastising in the smoke and flames
its uprising is comprimising my rationality with its brutality
with its vehement lacrimation total annihilation of my morality
is evident but all i can think of is you

Chorus 2
the black smoke is arising i am chastising in the smoke and flames
its uprising is comprimising my rationality with its brutality
im falling from sanity, Falling from grace
the flames are melting the waves

Alright this is my first attempt at writing a song tell me how i did
and yes you can tear me a new one
i would say a mixture of rock/rap

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